newbiesmoker24:Hey it looks good man! It looks like you really put a lot of hard work into the project. I think you deserve a good grade on it. The only thing I will say is to proof-read your papers MANY times before submitting them (including giving it to other people if you have time). There are a few grammatical and spelling errors. Strong writing skills will take you a long way in your future careers. Even something as simple as emailing. Other then those critiques everything was really great. Good job!
